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As we can see from the situation,___________ has become a common phenomenon among_________ . According to a newspaper survey, about _______ percent of____________,this trend will continue for a while in the future.

 


With regard to this phenomenon, people vary greatly in their viewpoint. Some argue that it’s _____________They believe that __________ They also hold that___________However, there are other people who look at this phenomenon in another way. For them, _____________ . we should take immediate measures to put an end to the current situation.

 

As a coin has two sides, it’s no exception to the phenomenon of____________ .As far as I’m concerned, __________should be (encouraged) in our (country). our (government) should play an active role in the ____________.(117 words)

 


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Nowadays people are much concerned with ________. Why should we ________? Is it necessary for everyone to ________? Such questions as these are often asked, especially by those ________. The answer to these questions often varies from person to person. Some people argue/maintain that ________. There is no denying that ________. It is certainly beneficial to people that ________. For all the advantages, it also brings its own problems. The main problem with it is that ________. Furthermore, ________. As nothing can be perfect in the world, we should take proper measures to minimize its negative effects and maximize its positive results. Firstly, ____. Secondly, _____. Finally, ______.(108 words)

 


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A much debate issue these days is whether ________ or ________. Some people claim that ________. Others insist that ________. As for me, the former/latter is more acceptable. It is true that ________, but the obvious defects are ________. Studies have shown that ________. Moreover, ________. Besides, ________. On the other hand, the advantages of ________ carry more weight that those of ________. For one thing, ________. For another, ________. In conclusion, ________. (73 words)

 


模版范文

 


Model One Graph Model(Based on Mock Paper One: Mobile Phone)
As depicted in the graph, the past three years have seen some important changes with regard to the production and export of mobile phones in China. In the year of 1999, China produced about 39.6 million phones and exported 2 million. Three years later, both the production and export grew sharply to 750 and 390 respectively.

 


It’s not difficult to for us to find some factors to account for this rapid growth. To begin with, the technology in producing mobile phones has advanced greatly in recent years. What’s more, as China entered WTO, more and more products made in China are finding their way into the world market. Besides, we can’t ignore the fact that our phones are not only cheap but also in very good quality.

 


As discussed above, it’s not surprising to see the rising trend of mobile phone production and export. In my opinion, this trend will continue for a while in the future. (157 words)[FS:PAGE]
Model Two Argument Model(Based on Mock Paper Three: Job-hopping)
As we can see from the situation, job-hopping has become a common phenomenon among graduates. According to a newspaper survey, about 46 percent of the graduates have changed their job in the first three years of their employment. Some of them have even made several changes.

 


With regard to this phenomenon, people vary greatly in their viewpoint. Some argue that it’s normal and acceptable to change job. They believe that by changing job, one can develop one’s career better. They also hold that job hopping can bring higher income and better working environment. However, there are other people who look at this phenomenon in another way. For them, job hopping may create an insecure condition. Besides, if one changes job frequently, one can not build a sound basis for his career.

 


As a coin has two sides, it’s no exception to the phenomenon of job hopping. As far as I’m concerned, job hopping should be encouraged in our country. (159 words)
Model Three Dispute Model(Based on Mock Paper Five: MBA Dilemma)

 


As is well known, MBA is faced with a difficult situation now in our country. Some people have deep doubts about its value. They even argue that the study of MBA is a waste of money and time. Some statistics appear to support their view: the number of MBA candidates has kept dropping in the past three years.

 


However, I disagree with them, and it is my firm belief that the study of MBA is not only useful but also necessary to the society as a whole and to the individuals in particular. On one hand, our country is still catching up with the developed countries, and what we need to learn from them is the advanced management skills and knowledge. The study of MBA can satisfy our need. On the other hand, if one wants to succeed in this competitive environment, one should have some knowledge of scientific management. In other words, the study of MBA can bring a person great success in the future career. Therefore, my opinion about the study of MBA is that it benefits society and person in many ways. (185 words)
Model Four Discussion Model(Based on Mock Paper Tw Income gap)

 


Nowadays there is a widespread concern in our society about the widening income gap. When we look around, the gap is the most obvious scene: rich people are having more than they can eat, want and use, but poor people are struggling for the basic needs: food and shelter.

 


The increasing gap is actually a matter of great complexity, which can be traced to a variety of factors. First of all, our country is developing itself in an unbalanced way. Our government pay more attention to the urban areas, but ignore the larger part of rural places. What’s more, it’s often found that education is a key factor in determining our income. Poor people are always those who are poorly educated.

 


As the situation is becoming worse, some serious consequences come up. Accordingly, we should take immediate measures to put an end to the current situation. In my opinion, our government should play an active role in the equal distribution of wealth. (162 words)[FS:PAGE]